You have to love two things to be an author: Books and writing. (I’m an advocate that writers should also love sleep deprivation and frustration, because you’ll be dealing with a lot of that too.) Whats the only thing better than books and writing? Books ABOUT writing! I’m pretty addicted to reading books that talk about […]
Hey guys, I know I haven’t posted much since my October book reviews. This is because I was busy participating in NaNoWriMo last month. Most of my free time was devoted to hitting the word counts. I actually went into a book slump last month, because I just didn’t have the energy to invest in any books. A lot of what I tried to read felt dry, and I didn’t have the patience to push through.
The good news though is that I achieved my NaNoWriMo goals. I had 2:
- Write at least 50,000 words
- Reach the midpoint of my story by this point
Since I’m writing an upper MG fantasy, I think 100,000 words is a good target to aim for, at least at the beginning. As you can see on the image, I went a little over and wrote 54,000+ words, but I still ended up at the midpoint, so I’m very happy.
So what’s the next step? I will be finishing off the 2nd draft of my story some time next month, working on the scene-by-scene outline this month. I already know that some things have to change, but I don’t think the changes would be drastic as they were during my 1st draft. And I think that it’s important to have some actual writing (instead of outline) on hand as material for future references. Don’t get me wrong, I love outlining, and I think it’s the most efficient way to find big problems before you spend your time drafting, but at some point you have to start writing. And some problems can only appear to you once you’ve actually written a more detailed account of the story.
There’s also something I plan to do this December that I’m pretty excited about. I’m coming to the end of my Master’s program, and I think it’s a good time to sign up for an online art course. I’ve posted several of my artworks before, so you guys all know what they look like, and I’ve come to the realization that since I began my self-taught foray into the world of art around 7 years ago, I haven’t really improved all that much. Most of my improvement was in efficiency: something that would take me a month to do when I was 18 now only takes me a week or so. But is the quality of the art any better? Hmm… not really. So I think it’s time to seek a more structured way of learning. I have been feeling very dissatisfied with my works lately, except I don’t know how I can improve them. What I need is the ability to identify what makes art good and how I can systematically get there.
Well, there’s my November overview. It was very tiring but also very productive. Here’s to hoping the final month of the year would be fruitful as well.
Hey guys! Sorry I haven’t done any writing posts for a while. It’s not that I haven’t been actively writing. On the contrary, I spent the entire month of September re-outlining my story after I found all the pain-points in my 1st draft (finished in July); and then writing a scene-by-scene outline for the upcoming 2nd draft. So yes, I’ve done a ton of work, and it mostly went very well. I should be writing a Writing Joys post instead, because I feel like planning went smoother than I expected.
But now that I finished the scene-by-scene outline, I realized that even after my first few bouts of re-outlining, my story is still a wild, unwieldy mess. There’s still too much going on, and the goals of many of the characters are not clear. I’m actually pretty glad I caught this before I went ahead and started writing out the scene-by-scene outline into an actual draft. I’d say, if I were to compare this to programming work, a scene-by-scene outline is like a proof of concept, and it was immensely helpful to me to see what worked and what didn’t.
So what am I doing now?
I’m trying to create more post-able material on my Tumblr blog; and by “post-able,” that pretty much means art. I can’t post my writing, after all. The Fun Fact Fridays I started some months back have fallen so far off the back-burner I don’t know if I will re-start it (made more unfortunate because I think I only did it for 4 weeks). Unfortunately, I haven’t had a lot of success creating original art recently, because my heart just isn’t into it. I have a list of artwork that I keep for times like this, but I tried striking one off the list, and I was just incredibly bored and impatient while drawing it. So I stopped yesterday, thinking I’m probably better off doing other things.
Now, I’m focusing on research and re-outlining once again to address the problems I saw on my scene-by-scene outline. Some books I’m currently reading:
2K to 10K by Rachel Aaron is a writing book that gives advice on how to increase your word count for every writing session you take. Rachel Aaron is one of my favourite authors (her Legend of Eli Monpress series is one of my absolute faves); not only is she traditionally published, she is also independently published. Like she says in the book, if she doesn’t write, she doesn’t eat. And while I do have a day job, or a primary career that I don’t plan to quite any time soon (or ever for that matter), I am still interested in increasing my writing pace. Actually, this is probably the main reason. Because I have another job, I don’t actually get a lot of writing time; and because I don’t want to be writing a single novel for the next 15 years, I want to be more efficient every time I sit down for an hour after I come home from work.
Paths of Origins is a rare-book about Island Southeast Asian artifacts, from jewellery to weapons textiles. It focuses on the Philippines and Indonesian archipelago, which means this book is a gold mine for me. I swear, every cent I paid for this book is more than worth it, even though it was kind of expensive since it’s rare. The high-resolution pictures are an incredibly valuable resource for me, my story and my artwork. The history in this book is amazing, and I have a firm belief that history books in the Philippines should look to this one on how to talk about pre-colonial history. In the ’90s when I was studying in the Philippines, I was still learning about the three-wave migration theory, which apparently was disproven by William Henry Scott and many other historians and archeologists in the 70s. 20 years later, my school was still feeding us outdated information. I hope that new learnings like the ones found in this book would eventually find their way to schools.
The Art of War is a book I saw referenced by Marie Rutkoski in her Winner’s trilogy. I looked it up and decided to read it, because there are a lot of militaristic angles to my story as well, and I thought it’s better I was educated about it. And it really is. After reading only the first 4 chapters, I’ve realized that there are some glaring plot holes in my story. So there you go. The more you know.
Woot! So I’m a winner in this month’s Camp NaNoWriMo!
Alright, so I might have cheated a little bit and bumped down my target word count from 50,000 to 40,000. That said, my goal for this camp was to finish off my first draft, and finish it off I did! There were some parts that I was unsure about, and had to write a detailed outline instead of writing it out fully; there were other parts that made sense in my initial outline but no longer did by the time I came to it, so I just jotted down some notes to remind myself to fix it later on. But I suppose these are what first drafts are for.
It’s July! That means it’s Camp NaNoWriMo! So far, I’ve been lucky to find the time to write so that I am, on average, hitting my word and plot goals. This month I plan to finish off the first draft to my novel, and I’m trying to do that in around 50,000 words.
The first two times that I participated in NaNoWriMo (the official one last November, and the camp version in April), I tried to employ the techniques I used as a fanfiction writer to churn out enough words and get my story moving. As you know, I have been writing fanfiction for 13 years, so I thought that if I had been able to write for that long, then I must have been doing something right.
I don’t think I was wrong in assuming that. But I think I was wrong in thinking that all the techniques I used to spin out story after story would apply to original fiction. Comparing how much better I’m doing in my third NaNoWriMo than the first two, I think I’ve sorted out which habits I used for fanfiction that aren’t translating very well to my original story.
1. Show, Don’t Tell
Yup, you read that right. This is such a common advice for making your story better all the time, but I find that this isn’t the case for me. At least, it isn’t the case right now in my first draft.
I know why people duke out this advice frequently. I’ve read my fair share of books that just aren’t immersive. The best reading experience is when you feel, as a reader, that you’re part of the world you’re reading. To give this experience, writers must “show, not tell.”
The catch with this advice is that, IMHO, you really should not be showing all the time. This is a technique that I used as a fanfiction writer so that I could churn out those 15,000 word chapters that are so popular in fandoms. The more words you write, the more material your readers can engage in. That’s what they like. And fanfiction chapters are no big commitment to readers; they’ll gobble the stuff up at midnight, and wait (impatiently or patiently) for the next chapter.
So to beef up my chapters, I used to show everything. A character walking up the stairs? Yup, I’ll show how he took one step and the next, and I’ll probably describe what kind of internal conflict is prancing to the beat of those steps. I once read a fanfiction that described someone slipping and falling in so much detail, that it took more time for me to read the passage than for the character to fall.
While I think this is excusable in fanfiction, in the first draft of my original story I realized that it’s holding me back. When I need to advance the plot in the grand scheme of my story, does it really matter what the characters are eating for breakfast and how they’re eating it and what they think about it? Do I really need to spend a page describing said breakfast? Because really, that’s what showing means. Showing is supposed to bring the readers along for the ride, and how can readers be immersed in the experience of breakfast if I don’t describe it?
The thing about writing that I’m discovering rather quickly is that not everything is important. If something is not going to make a very big impact in your book, or it’s not going to advance the plot or the characterization in some way, it’s probably best if you keep it out. Hence, it’s totally okay to just say, “Bob and Bill had breakfast, and then drove away.”
Because this is an advcie that I see everywhere, I’m still trying to get used to the idea that I can just “tell.” But for the first draft, I know that I can always plump up my scenes later after I’ve established what exactly is important or not.
2. Resort to Introspection
I love, love, love introspective fanfictions. All those times we’ve wondered what a character was actually thinking in a particular scene? Or perhaps I’m reading an AU and I want to see how their mind works in this new world? I’m game! Introspection is one of my indulgent guilty-pleasures.
So naturally when I write, I tend to resort to introspective scenes quite often. I do it primarily to fill up my word count in a show-y kind of way (as I mentioned above), but I also do it to open the characters’ minds up to the readers. My one-shots are usually full of introspection; my multi-chaptered fanfictions that have overarching plots have less introspection, but they are still noticeably there.
And here’s why I think too many introspective passages won’t work so well in original fiction: you want to leave some of those inner dialogue up to the reader. There’s a reason why I’m attracted to introspective fanfiction, and it’s because I didn’t get them in the canon material. But depending on what kind of story you’re writing, the main job of the canon material is to tell that story effectively in a limited number of space; the thing is, you’re not always going to have the luxury of giving a blow-by-blow account of what your character is thinking, and chances are, there are more important parts to the story you should be writing instead. Now, don’t get me wrong. I am primarily geared towards character-driven stories moreso than plot-driven ones. All I’m saying is that we don’t always need to be in their minds all the time. Sometimes, it’s sufficient to just see through their eyes.
That said, I totally understand that there are novels out there whose primary job is to get us into a character’s head. Mrs Dalloway, anyone? But considering that I’m writing a children’s fantasy adventure story, there are other things that I might need to be developing.
(Late reminder, but from now on, when I say “story,” assume I’m talking about genre fiction at the very least, or more specifically, fantasy fiction.)
3. Write 10,000 word chapters
As a natural result of the first two, my stories tend to have extremely long chapters. Each of my fanfiction chapters have at least 3 scenes in it, whereas a typical chapter in a real book probably deals with only one scene at a time (not all, but mostly).
I realized how much this held me back in writing my original story, because I wouldn’t feel comfortable ending a chapter within, say, 1000 words even though I’ve already written what needed to happen in that scene. And I’d go, “How can I make this longer?” And so I would resort to #1 and #2. That meant I was spending time not advancing the story in any meaningful way. Ironically, because I was so used to padding my chapters with #1 and #2, I didn’t think about writing more effective scenes in their places. I would feel “stuck” on a chapter, because that other scene that would advance the plot obviously belonged to the next chapter, and I would keep postponing it. Terrible habit.
4. Take Weeks To Write a Chapter
And this definitely follows from the first three. As a fanfiction writer, I set my goal for finishing each chapter within two weeks. For 10,000 words this seemed reasonable, especially because I’m a commuter and I work full-time. But sometimes, even when nothing is happening in a chapter, I would wait out those two weeks and try to churn something.
It took me a while to convince myself that I absolutely don’t need to spend two weeks on a chapter. I could write whatever I can today, and if tomorrow I feel like there’s nothing left in a chapter to work on, I could move on.
Well, when I started this last week, I think I had more example of bad habits on my mind. Now that I am finishing up, I realize I can’t think of anymore. So why don’t I take some advice from myself, and it this post right here? =)
You know that saying, “How do you expect people to love you when you don’t love yourself?” Or I don’t know, something along those lines, though perhaps not quite so harsh, as I’m sure I’ve seen that saying on several get-well sites.
Well, that’s how I’m feeling about my own characters. I have talked about this before in this other post. Before that, I also mentioned being bored of my own story. I have taken a break from my story for several weeks, and I am now gearing up for next month’s Camp NaNoWriMo. I have dusted off my notes, and once again, refactored the plot. I spruced up the characters. I have read and reviewed three writing books.
Here’s the thing. I don’t think the problem is with the concept of my characters or the concept of my story. I think the problem is with me, the writer. Let me clarify what I mean about that. When I think of my story, I get very excited… but only if I am thinking about it from the point of view of a reader. The concept I have come up with is something I have wanted to read for a long, long time and the main reason I decided to write this story is because I am done waiting for the market to cater it to me. A lot of the plot points I constructed for my story are ones I would love to read about. Same with the characters; I created my characters, if not similar to the characters I love from other books, at least to possess qualities that I know I would like as a reader.
And this is the problem. I’m more interested in reading my story than I am in writing it.
The writing books don’t help at all in this regard. All of the writing books I’ve read try to instruct writers in how they can make their story enjoyable for their readers. However, none of them have any advice for how authors can enjoy writing their own stories. And I suppose that’s my main concern. Is it possible for readers to enjoy what I write, when me, the writer, doesn’t enjoy what I’m writing? From the quotation at the beginning, it seems unlikely.
I haven’t figured out yet how to solve this particular writing problem, since like I said most writing books out there guide writers on how to please their readers, rather than to make the task of writing enjoyable. If anyone out there knows of writing books that does the latter, I’d be very pleased to take recommendations!
Wow, I realize that I’ve only ever had “Writing Woes” posts, where I talk about everything that goes wrong in my writing. I didn’t actually have a positive writing post until now, which is kind of sad now that I think about it.
Anyway, “joy” is probably an overzealous word for what happened, but small wins are still wins in my book. Nothing dramatic happened, except that I managed to untangle the big hairy plot that I talked about in my previous Writing Woes post. Not only did I manage to do it, but I did it in 7 days. That’s… impressive by my standards, considering that I’ve been straining against this plot since the beginning of the year. Is it super-polished? Hah, no, I don’t think I’ll get to that stage until I’ve gone through 3 drafts at least. But the good news now is that I can move forward with my 1st draft without wanting to pull all my hair out.
I took a 3-week break from my story, and when I was re-outlining, I considered every plot point up for debate. And that worked out so well for me. When I considered that some of the determining plot points didn’t need to happen, or did not need to happen the way that I envisioned it would, it was much easier to tease out the tangles in the plot. I still lost a considerable number of characters, but I think it’s for the better. (Remember Nasi, the tarsier? I don’t know why I didn’t nuke him out of the story from the get-go. The poor animal had no speaking lines, had very little motivation, and didn’t contribute to the plot. But as attached as I had become to this useless character, I wound up giving him the pink slip as well.)
I believe there’s another Camp NaNoWriMo coming up in July, and I am going to try and finish the 1st draft then. I know it’s an ambitious goal, seeing it’s taken me 7 months to write the first half. But I think it’s also pretty telling that this children’s book is only halfway done at 70,000 words. I think I need to tell the story with less verbosity. Considering this is the first draft, I’ll resort to ‘telling’ rather than ‘showing’ if I need to move the plot along.
My hope is to be able to churn out a complete 2nd draft by the end of the year. It’s actually this goal that prompted me to re-outline my plot. My initial plan was to push through the first draft and figure out the changes to the plot as I go along, but it was causing me to lag behind my goals. I’ve read many writers advice that when you’re writing a draft, you shouldn’t go back and edit right away, but keep writing with your changes in mind. This wasn’t enough for me. I really had to revisit the entire story. It was disorienting for me to keep writing without addressing the issues from the parts I’d already written. It’s hard to build upon the story without knowing what events happened previously.