Writing Woes: Re-Re-Outlining

Hey guys! Sorry I haven’t done any writing posts for a while. It’s not that I haven’t been actively writing. On the contrary, I spent the entire month of September re-outlining my story after I found all the pain-points in my 1st draft (finished in July); and then writing a scene-by-scene outline for the upcoming 2nd draft. So yes, I’ve done a ton of work, and it mostly went very well. I should be writing a Writing Joys post instead, because I feel like planning went smoother than I expected.

But now that I finished the scene-by-scene outline, I realized that even after my first few bouts of re-outlining, my story is still a wild, unwieldy mess. There’s still too much going on, and the goals of many of the characters are not clear. I’m actually pretty glad I caught this before I went ahead and started writing out the scene-by-scene outline into an actual draft. I’d say, if I were to compare this to programming work, a scene-by-scene outline is like a proof of concept, and it was immensely helpful to me to see what worked and what didn’t.

So what am I doing now?

I’m trying to create more post-able material on my Tumblr blog; and by “post-able,” that pretty much means art. I can’t post my writing, after all. The Fun Fact Fridays I started some months back have fallen so far off the back-burner I don’t know if I will re-start it (made more unfortunate because I think I only did it for 4 weeks). Unfortunately, I haven’t had a lot of success creating original art recently, because my heart just isn’t into it. I have a list of artwork that I keep for times like this, but I tried striking one off the list, and I was just incredibly bored and impatient while drawing it. So I stopped yesterday, thinking I’m probably better off doing other things.

Now, I’m focusing on research and re-outlining once again to address the problems I saw on my scene-by-scene outline. Some books I’m currently reading:

2K to 10K by Rachel Aaron is a writing book that gives advice on how to increase your word count for every writing session you take. Rachel Aaron is one of my favourite authors (her Legend of Eli Monpress series is one of my absolute faves); not only is she traditionally published, she is also independently published. Like she says in the book, if she doesn’t write, she doesn’t eat. And while I do have a day job, or a primary career that I don’t plan to quite any time soon (or ever for that matter), I am still interested in increasing my writing pace. Actually, this is probably the main reason. Because I have another job, I don’t actually get a lot of writing time; and because I don’t want to be writing a single novel for the next 15 years, I want to be more efficient every time I sit down for an hour after I come home from work.

Paths of Origins is a rare-book about Island Southeast Asian artifacts, from jewellery to weapons textiles. It focuses on the Philippines and Indonesian archipelago, which means this book is a gold mine for me. I swear, every cent I paid for this book is more than worth it, even though it was kind of expensive since it’s rare. The high-resolution pictures are an incredibly valuable resource for me, my story and my artwork. The history in this book is amazing, and I have a firm belief that history books in the Philippines should look to this one on how to talk about pre-colonial history. In the ’90s when I was studying in the Philippines, I was still learning about the three-wave migration theory, which apparently was disproven by William Henry Scott and many other historians and archeologists in the 70s. 20 years later, my school was still feeding us outdated information. I hope that new learnings like the ones found in this book would eventually find their way to schools.

The Art of War is a book I saw referenced by Marie Rutkoski in her Winner’s trilogy. I looked it up and decided to read it, because there are a lot of militaristic angles to my story as well, and I thought it’s better I was educated about it. And it really is. After reading only the first 4 chapters, I’ve realized that there are some glaring plot holes in my story. So there you go. The more you know.

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September 2017 Reads

Wow, I think I made a reading record last month. 6 books! I’m notorious for being a slow reader, but I don’t know what I happened… I blew through 4 large books and 2 smaller ones.

7908762Troubled Waters by Sharon Shinn

This book got me out of my reading slump. It’s about a noble girl who lived most of her life in exile, until her father died and she was brought back to court life. As someone who is an elemental mage, she holds a lot of power and soon she finds herself embroiled in intrigue.

I love how character-centric this was. Even though much of the plot isn’t action-oriented, I was always wondering what’s going to happen to Zoe next. Zoe was a likeable character, though I think for a character-oriented book, it kind of lacked a character arc.

One of the plot twists that I was afraid of happening happened in the last 5 pages of the book, which was… erm, a bit of a let down. So overall, I enjoyed this book lots except for a few parts, and thank it very much for pulling me out of my reading slump.

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Brown Skin, White Minds by E.J.R. David

This is another research book I read to help me with my original project. It’s a highly recommended item for Filipino research, but I didn’t pick it up for the longest time because my focus is on precolonial Philippines, whereas this looks at postcolonial. Anyway, here’s my review from Goodreads:

I decided to pick up this book because I thought that although my project is on precolonial peoples, my audience is not. It’s important for me to know what issues are relevant in today’s postcolonial society, so that I can at least be sensitive about it in my project.

This book gave me a lot of reassurance that my experience is not by any means a singularity. Apparently they’re very prevalent. I think this is where the book shines: it shows psychological studies on colonial mentality and also paves a way on how to deal with it. I especially liked the chapter where the empirical studies were shown. Unfortunately there was a chapter or two on theoretical postulation that I think would have benefited greatly from some empirical data; as it is, those chapters had a lot of “may cause” or “might influence” wordings that don’t have a lot of data to back the theories. This book also frequently reads like a school paper, which might be understandable, seeing that the author is a scholar. But the wordings tend to be repetitive and paragraphs seem to say the same things over and over. I think the author was overly cautious that something might be taken out of context.

18270942Why We Fail by Victor Lombardi

Okay, this one is for school. We were asked to review a business book, and this was one of the few books that caught my interest in the pre-selected list.

This book looks at products that failed due to terrible user experience. Overall, I found the book to be quite bloggish. Each of the case studies was interesting in and of itself, but I was expecting a little more from a book compilation. I was hoping for some cohesive and unified lesson that could be applied to the next business venture, but there wasn’t really anything like that. Some things that caused the failure of one product would be the cause of success for another. So it doesn’t really leave you with any kind of applicable knowledge. The only thing I liked was the suggestion of using the scientific method.

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The Duchess War by Courtney Milan

I rarely ever read romance, and this is one of the few times that I did. Here’s my review from Goodreads:

This is one of the rare times I make a foray into the romance genre. While I’ve read a few romance books before, I’ve mostly stayed away for two, perhaps petty, reasons. A) I don’t like large age gaps, which seems to be the staple of the genre, and B) to say that I dislike rakes is quite an understatement. I picked up this book because miraculously it has neither. I actually saw the book recommended on a Tumblr post about romance unicorns.

And what a book it was! This book has so many threads in it that were all equally fascinating. Even the romance seemed to take a step back to other themes like family, wealth and ambition. The story of Minnie’s past was honestly so unique and creative, now I’m wanting an adventure book based on a twelve-year-old prodigy.

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A Darker Shade of Magic by V.E. Schwab

Ah, I love fantasy books like this! I’ve been meaning to read this for a while now but I’ve just been swarmed with books on my TBR.

Kell Maresh is an Antari, a person who can travel between different worlds. One day he was framed to smuggle in a powerful object into his world. Piggybacking on his travels is petty thief Lila Bard. Together, they try to prevent the destruction that the smuggled object will cause.

This is a fun adventure book, and I love the two main protagonists. I’m still not too keen on the perfect prince, but we’ll see if I get to know him better in the following books. The only thing I didn’t like about this book was that it was too short! Good thing there’s 2 more books in the series, which I’m looking forward to reading.

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Six of Crows by Leigh Bardugo

Ah, this is one of those books that everybody has been talking about but I wasn’t really interested in picking up until two of my friends told me it is really good. Needless to say it deserves all the hype it got, because man, this is a stellar example of great fantasy writing.

Kaz and his band of thieves are hired to retrieve a prisoner from one of the toughest prisons for a hefty price. However, everyone’s got baggage, and they just might kill each other. Heh. Bad plot summary, because the plot itself is too smart for a summary.