Writing Woes: Re-Re-Outlining

Hey guys! Sorry I haven’t done any writing posts for a while. It’s not that I haven’t been actively writing. On the contrary, I spent the entire month of September re-outlining my story after I found all the pain-points in my 1st draft (finished in July); and then writing a scene-by-scene outline for the upcoming 2nd draft. So yes, I’ve done a ton of work, and it mostly went very well. I should be writing a Writing Joys post instead, because I feel like planning went smoother than I expected.

But now that I finished the scene-by-scene outline, I realized that even after my first few bouts of re-outlining, my story is still a wild, unwieldy mess. There’s still too much going on, and the goals of many of the characters are not clear. I’m actually pretty glad I caught this before I went ahead and started writing out the scene-by-scene outline into an actual draft. I’d say, if I were to compare this to programming work, a scene-by-scene outline is like a proof of concept, and it was immensely helpful to me to see what worked and what didn’t.

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September 2017 Reads

Wow, I think I made a reading record last month. 6 books! I’m notorious for being a slow reader, but I don’t know what I happened… I blew through 4 large books and 2 smaller ones.

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Troubled Waters by Sharon Shinn

This book got me out of my reading slump. It’s about a noble girl who lived most of her life in exile, until her father died and she was brought back to court life. As someone who is an elemental mage, she holds a lot of power and soon she finds herself embroiled in intrigue.

I love how character-centric this was. Even though much of the plot isn’t action-oriented, I was always wondering what’s going to happen to Zoe next. Zoe was a likeable character, though I think for a character-oriented book, it kind of lacked a character arc.

One of the plot twists that I was afraid of happening happened in the last 5 pages of the book, which was… erm, a bit of a let down. So overall, I enjoyed this book lots except for a few parts, and thank it very much for pulling me out of my reading slump.

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